Apr 22, 2024
Noah:
Sorry, but this is a rambling and difficult to understand piece. The background involving the Japanese attack on Pearl Harbor is complicated and multifaceted. I don’t think you give it all justice in your superficial treatment of the topic.
With multiple grammatical errors, your article is very difficult to read, and your points are not substantiated.
Perhaps you could spend some time on this and refine it. I think I generally understand what you’re trying to say, but you didn’t quite say it.
Walter